New POV

Now writing from Mafileo's viewpoint. "Viewpoint" makes more sense in reference to her than in reference to Nitsur: she's the visual one. I kept the recap of the temple scene to a summary.

Have to figure out where to work in a chapter about her childhood & training that parallels Nitsur's. Probably I'll follow the same structure: write a good-sized chapter about their escape and early travels, then break for her flashback, then back to the main story line.

Words continue to accumulate. Insh'allah I'll break 25,000 today: half way there and only Nov. 13 out of 30.